Wednesday, 28 March 2018

The Switched off Robot

I am learning to: create a narrative based on an image

Click, click, click. That was Amy. She is on her computer, Her eyes glued to the screen, trying to be able to finish her homework on top of her comfortable bed. Amy is doing her homework because it is 2045 and this new year she wants to be on task everyday. Amy has long, curly brown hair and blue eyes, just like her mum. Amy loves the colour red and making robots too.

Grumble Grumble. Bang! She lands on the floor, I’m hungry. . She thinks to herself so as stealthy and as sneaky as she can she gets up and goes to the kitchen. Past her dog Snowy and through the hallway. She gets to the stairs and tiptoes down. Amy gets to the kitchen successfully and opens the fridge to see some glorious juice. Amy grabs the juice and then she sees chocolate so she grabs that too! Amy pulls the cupboard open and snatches a cup. Once she has got everything she pours the juice and chucks the juice in the fridge, then the rest of the chocolate away as well. Amy slurps and gobbles all of it up then sprints quickly and quietly up to her bedroom before anyone sees her.

Amy jumps back into bed and reads a book. A few minutes later just when she was going to put the book back she hears something outside. zzzzZZZZZ, zzzzzzzZZZZZZZ.

Krr Krr krr. She peeks outside her dark wet window and she sees a GIANT SHINY BIG RED ROBOT!!! As much as she loves the colour red and loves robots she knows she can’t let it in but she can’t help but go back downstairs and let the robot in. Amy sees the robot is shivering and cold so she grabs a towel and drys the robot off. Amy also grabs a blanket and covers the robot up. They then talk for awhile and become friends straight away. But when they were finished talking and Amy was tired she had to get the robot out. She sent him outside and Amy went back up to bed. She fell asleep dreaming about the red robot.

( yawn ) Amy rolls out of bed and opens her eyes so sleepily she can’t even get up!

Then mum comes in. Oh ohhh Amy says in her mind. “AMYYYYYY!” mum shouts.

“IT”S 8:22am!”

“Okay, okay I’ll get dressed, now go please.” Once Amy can finally get up and get dressed. She grabs her uniform and chucks it on her. She goes downstairs and fills up her water bottle, takes her lunch, then mum and Amy leave the house. “ Bye Snowy,” she says. “woof, woof,” barks Snowy. Then off they go, amy is hoping that she gets there on time.

It’s 8:34am and they're almost at school. “ Mum can you look for my red robo?” Amy said.

“ What?” Mum screamed. “Ohh fine, last night I found a red robot and I really wanted him back because I let him outside. So can you look for it? Please?”

“WHAT, A RED ROBOT,” asked mum. “Shh, shhh it’s okay, but please will you just look for it ?” asked Amy.

“Alright then,” mum said. As Amy grabbed the door and handle and pushed the door open she jumped out of the car and walked into the school gates. Mum drove off and starts searching for the red robot.

Mum searched and searched but it was nowhere. Then just as she was racing home she sees a ginormous red tall sharp armed ROBOT!!! “AHHHHHH,” Mum screamed, “that must be Amy’s robot!” Mum slowly clicks the door open and crouches down for a few seconds then runs over and talks to him. “Hello, do you know Amy?” she mumbles. “Yes I do we are good friends,” says the red robot.
“Ok so can you please come home with me? Amy is looking for you and she is really sad,” says mum.
“Ok,” the robot says in a robot voice.
Then mum glides back into the car and rides off, with the robot behind her. When they arrive home, it’s almost time for Amy to come back so mum starts cooking dinner.

The door creaks open and Amy Strides in. “Hi mum!” Amy sweetly says.
“Hi Amy, I found your robot,” mum said.
“Thats awesome I’m just going to get changed,” says Amy. She runs upstairs and chooses a red dress with robots all over it. While Amy is getting dressed mum accidentally switches something off (and doesn't realize she switched off the robot!). Amy races downstairs and she has a VERY EXCITED EXPRESSION! Her expression doesn’t turn off and she is the most happiest girl in the world, she cannot wait to see her ROBOT!!! But once she got down and tried to play with it, it doesn't work. Amy starts panicking, “ MUM MY ROBOT ISN”T WORKING, NOOOOOO!” Amy Screams. Mum speeds around the house trying to look for something to fix it but they don’t see anything!!

They finally they get back to the robot and mum realizes that she might have switched it off!

They look around for the switch and they find it. When it gets switched back on, Amy jumps up and down non stop. The robot walks to Amy then they become best friends.

“I will name you… RED, yes, RED,” says Amy. After playing together it’s time for bed. Amy sets down a warm fluffy blanket for Red and she rests in her bed. They snuggle up tightly and shut their eyes, fall asleep deeply and dream about ROBOTS!

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